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Joelle Stone

[With a happy step, Wren turned onto the main street, holding her dress back to avoid the grimy wall. It was rather filthy, but overall, the village was quite lovely.]

Mm, not quite. I wouldn’t put anything there, since it’s obviously coming from her perspective. But things like “Wren held back her dress to avoid the grimy wall. No use getting it dirty, is it?” are more of a grey area for me. *shrugs* Not super clear, I know. Sorry. XD

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