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Thank you both for your feedback!

I’m not used to working with such a small word count, so it was helpful to see the areas that I need to polish.



Is it part of a larger story, or is it just this scene?

It is part of a much larger story, at least I want it to be. Right now it’s still in the developing stages but I have high hopes for it’s future. 😁 I didn’t explain this in my submission, but the books Soren insisted were so important to the mission are actually to help her master her special ability called Vir manipulation, which is sort of like the world’s magic system.
Also, Parr is an apprentice dragon trainer.

What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

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