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Noah Cochran


Okay, okay, I’ll do it. You have straight brown hair, a stockyish, tall build, and large hazel eyes.

Cathy is slim, shortish, bouncy in movement, has light brown hair (or maybe dark blonde), and coy green eyes.

That’s all I’ve got. I don’t really picture people as anything other than a normal looking person with their online personalities lighting up (or darkening I guess) their face.


Total street urchin, did you expect otherwise?

Of course I didn’t Cathy.

Wait a sec, why do you assume I’m the elder, Noah?

I’m fairly confident you told me you were sixteen or seventeen somewhere. Maybe not, but Erynne just turned 15, and you’re obviously not younger than that.

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