You are very welcome ^_^ I am glad you found it helpful.
haha, fair enough!
Kylo Ren is a good example of how not to write a redemption arc, lol. And I love it when I give people ideas XD
You know, that’s ok. That is what this forum and the editing process are for. We are all human, with our own gifting’s and blind spots, and we all could support now and then ^_^ I am very glad my advice has been helpful.
On that note, I did finish up the last bit of my critique on the previous page, if you are interested.