That was excellent, and surprisingly close to how I was trying to portray Joelle for someone who just read a few paragraphs about her. I copied that and saved in a google doc to analyze later.
Glad I could help! She was interesting to write!
You might have told me already, but how long have you been writing Rose?
Just over a year, and at least six months of that was just me learning how to punctuate dialogue, how to spell ‘necessary’, ‘villain’, and ‘rhythm’, and how to get my characters from one place to the other without making it seem like they teleported. XD
So, don’t take any of my advice without squinting at it critically and remembering it comes from a person who has been sorely tempted to quote memes in actual, serious writing. (I wish I was kidding.)
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