That was excellent, and surprisingly close to how I was trying to portray Joelle for someone who just read a few paragraphs about her. I copied that and saved in a google doc to analyze later. 🙂
You might have told me already, but how long have you been writing Rose?
It delights me that you enjoyed it Gracie 🙂
I also immensely enjoy the “in the character’s head” style of writing. My sister loves this style, and is continually edifying me to get in their heads more. 🙂 I’ve been working on improving my skill at closing physic distance, though I think there is a place for a more distant, observing style in books.
I’ll put you on my possible beta readers Gracie. 🙂
I’m glad you enjoyed Rolant’s POV. Next time I’ll actually write one from his POV. 😉