Ohhhhhh, a beta reader!
I’m only just completing the first draft of my story at this point, but I would love to have someone go over it and tell me what they think. The story is very emotionally pushed (or supposed to be), so it would be awesome if you could read it and tell me what you think, mainly about if you get emotionally connected to the characters or anything.
I’m not too worried about other things because, although I know it needs a lot of work, it’s only the first draft and I’m going to work out more of the plot holes and such in my next drafts. So my main concern is if my story is emotionally engaging. The storyline itself is, but I’m not sure if I’m capturing that or not.
If you’re interested at all, I can give you more details about the story itself. 🙂
Even the smallest person can change the course of the future. -JRR Tolkien