Okay, I haven’t read all the posts here since there are a lot and they’re pretty long, but I just wanted to tell you that your story sounds fantastic and your names for all the different people groups suit them very well. Names can make or break a story for me, and I think you did a very good job with them.
(You can call me Sparrow. I’m a fan of dead languages, books of most kinds, and Oxford commas. I haven’t written much, but my two biggest projects/WIPs are realistic contemporary and high fantasy. In fact, the contemporary WIP involves a group of RPGers.)
Semper ubi sub ubi.