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ScoutFinch190
@scoutfinch190

@this-is-not-an-alien

Thanks! I’m actually considering sharing the entire story sometime if you’d like to read it.


@rose-colored-fancy

I think that you’re revision is great! I am able to get into the mind of your POV character and I can visualize what’s happening quite well. Out of curiosity, what time era is this story set in? Why was Sahar carrying a knife?

We crazy people are the normal ones.

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