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Arindown (Gracie)
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This is the introduction I give for my MC, Thane, from the POV of Mr. Burncut, a tavern owner.๐Ÿ˜ I’ll probably revamp it in the future, but here it is…

As Mr. Burncut crossed the room, someone caught his eye. A figure was sitting alone in the far corner, head lowered, and dirty leather boots sticking out from underneath a thick dark cloak. Something about the way the travelerโ€™s black eyes glinted as he watched the room made Mr. Burncut uncomfortable.

Not all those who wander are lost.

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