I agree with Joelle! It instantly made me think of Pilgrim’s Progress. I like it!
OooOOh! Very cool! Is this Connel, or another villain?
(erhm how’d ya’ll do that quote-thingy?)
Up in the toolbar, above the text, there’s a little quote icon. (Third from the left) Just click it and type or paste! Double enter to go back to normal.
"Stories are light. Light is precious in a world so dark." The Tale of Despereaux