Hi guys! This looks like fun! Hope you don’t mind that I join in 😉
(Still really want to see yours, Kylie!)
Here are the first two lines from my first book:
I didn’t think twice. If I had, I might not have rushed into the cloud of purple smoke.
Yeah, that summarizes Liorah’s character pretty well XD. I’d love critique! Does it work as a first line?
I actually have some more pieces I’m pretty proud of. Are you allowed to post more than once?
Without darkness, there is no light. If there was no nighttime, would the stars be as bright?