Hi guys! This looks like fun! Hope you don’t mind that I join in 😉
(Still really want to see yours, Kylie!)
Here are the first two lines from my first book:
I didn’t think twice. If I had, I might not have rushed into the cloud of purple smoke.
Yeah, that summarizes Liorah’s character pretty well XD. I’d love critique! Does it work as a first line?
I actually have some more pieces I’m pretty proud of. Are you allowed to post more than once?
"Stories are light. Light is precious in a world so dark." The Tale of Despereaux