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Emma Walker


Im still brainstorming on the city, but it is a location in Esthelle’s story at some point so I guess I should get started on that.
As of now I know that it’s hidden underneath a layer of coral and rock that acts as the sea bottom. Picture a chest with a false bottom, there’s normally a hidden secret something in the secret compartment below.
there’s small openings in the coral for the people and fish and other sea creatures to go in and out.
The city is led by a prime minister.
Most Lepai are born in Udequa, which is the name of the city, and every time their hair gets wet, the water turns some of it green, like copper when it is out in the elements, for example the Statue of Liberty. When their hair dries it turns back into its original color.

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