I love the difference you put into Faye and Liorah’s voices. It’s so distinct.
Thank you! I decided to write both in first person, so I tried to make it distinct XD
Your characters sound like they have awesome voices! I love sarcastic characters! *Coughcough* Liorah.
And a character that is both logical and still doesn’t take stuff seriously sounds like so much fun!
"Stories are light. Light is precious in a world so dark." The Tale of Despereaux