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Thank you so much!!!! 😀 And thanks for reading it! 🙂
Good job. I can almost feel the fire burning in the hearts of those men and women. May they never be forgotten.🤧
I’m so glad you found it so vivid! It was just what I was aiming for. 😉 And I totally agree.
I light the arrow, pull the bow,
Shoot that fire right through my soul.