Very interesting!! The only thing is you mentioned three half-man creatures but only listed two 😉
Also, your collage fits well with the description!
Don’t worry, I have the sameee problem with my story. Any time I try to describe it, it ends up sounding super confusing. I thought a blurb would help with that, but I have to figure out how to make one that isn’t cliche or confusing. (That’s what it will probably be no matter what, but I have to at least convince myself to try XD)
