Oh my, I’m so sorry for being so late to this topic! I only just saw it.
I would agree with what everyone has said–it’s sounds interesting and holds promise!! (I know that you’re working on your other project and that last time I wanted to read your story it didn’t quite work out, but if/when you get to writing this, and if it does work out, I’d love to beta/alpha read it for you! But that’s probably a long way in the future 😛 )
If your dreams turn to dust... vacuum.