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@joelle-stone, looks like you’ve got a pretty solid set of potential motives for your villain. Any one, or combination of them, could create quite a strong story for him, I think.

As for your protagonist, I think what you’ve got listed are less goals/motivations and more like what are sometimes called “inciting incidents” the event that forces the character out of his/her normal life into an adventure. They’re all legitimate too, depending on what kind of person your protagonist is, but I like number one the best, probably because it’s the one I’d be most likely to fall for.

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