Good points! And YES, Wingfeather Saga!!! (Spidifer is like THE WORST character on PLANET EARTH. 😛 )
Thanks for your tips! They’ve been most helpful (and your story sounds quite interesting). *bows*
I will certainly keep all of this in mind as I tweak the idea. I’ll probably bring up your guys’ points with my brainstorming team when we talk on Friday, and I’ll see what they say. 🙂
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