Hmm, probably ’cause I was trying to post a link :/
I won’t post the link then, but maybe you can copy and paste this? Here it is: https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-fiction/tips-for-creating-voice-in-your-writing
In this article, not everything lined up perfectly with your question, but it might help. I only skimmed through it ’cause I’m a bit short on time, but it looked like it had some helpful tips 😉
BTW, are you talking about the Untitled/Unnamed Tale/Story (forgive me, but I can’t remember the exact names) or a different story?:)
Kindness is the language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.