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@melodyjoy

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    You are so right! It is the part that makes the reader want to keep reading, or put the book down, and search for a new one. I have to admit, my first line, being “I fumbled with my keys.” isn’t the most captivating, but the whole first paragraph together is much better, as a whole 🙂

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